Peaceful Communities

Gymnastics Photo

This is my Gymnastics photo when I went to the Gymnastics competition.

Different Techniques

Plastic Good or Bad

Plastic is Very Bad                    

Plastic is bad because it kill animals. Some animals might even become extinct because of the plastic problem.   Plastic can kill animals.  When people throw rubbish onto the ground it goes through the drains and into the sea.  Some animals in the sea might eat the rubbish and die. Or some sea animals might get wrapped up in the rubbish and die a painful death.

The author thinks  that all plastic can not be recycled. Plastic  takes a long time to be recycled.  I wish there was a way to recycle all plastic. We eat fish and fish can eat plastic. That means that we eat the  plastic too. We can help the fish and all the sea animals by not throwing the rubbish onto the ground.  We need to put all our rubbish in the bins.

By Manusha

This is about what happens when people throw  rubbish on the ground.

Peace Sense Poen

I am learning to write a Poem about Peace One Day using my senses.

I am so proud of being able to describe what Peace feels like, tastes like and sounds like.

It can be tricky to describe what I am thinking and feeling.

The thesaurus can help me by giving me interesting words to use.

The next step for me in my learning is to write another Peace Poem.

Going to Hell!

Going To Hell

It was 3:45am. I was crammed into the rowing boat. I wanted to go back home. It was pitch black and I was shivering with fear. We were nearly at the Gallipoli Peninsula.

Suddenly there was a spark of light. Bang ! Bang ! Bang ! There were bullets raining down on us. Soldiers were dying and screaming with fear.

I felt a sharp pain on my leg. I looked at it. There was blood pouring from it. Sweat was pouring from my body. I thought I was going to hell ! By Manusha

I am learning to write an interesting recount.

I am so proud of making my recount interesting by using similes and adjectives   

It can be tricky to the right adjectives for the right sentence

My buddy can help me by checking my work.

The next step for me in my learning is to write an even better recount.